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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-11-14 04:06 PM


Disturbed by writings on the wall
And wild thoughts that will not settle
I see the sun through rusty metal
I hear the silence in the hall
I think tomorrow is the day
The clock is showing half passed three
The only one who’s here with me--
A friendly spider eats his prey
A pencil which was long like life
Is now less than a third its length
And yet it still contains its strength
To help me breathe, to help me strive
My days go by with speed of lightning
Even my nights seem way to brief
I know, I’m lacking time to live
Just give me time to finish writing
His deadly work appears so neat
The friendly spider weaves his web
Hand of the clock takes one more step
As one more line falls on the sheet
“The life I lived was an illusion
I will awake and it will fade”
Upon the paper is the date--
The day before the execution

© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-11-14 08:08 PM


Master, this is the best thing I've read of yours since "I'm Laughing at Humanity"

BTW, might you oblige me by reposting that one?

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-11-14 09:58 PM


Sure can! GLad you liked this one!
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