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Teen Poetry #2

Oh dear god ..

LinaInverse
Junior Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 18

0 posted 1999-11-12 10:17 PM

I pulled out of the drive way one night,
I wasent in any fright,
I looked all around ,
I left th drive way and went around,
Looking for my friend.
My friend was drunk and asked me come get her,
I did it for her cause i cared ,
I saw a car pulling out,
I shouted out ,
"GOD TAKE CARE OF ME CAUSE HERE I COME"
The person who hit me was a bum ,
I lyed their unconcious for several hours,
I really needed a shower,
When I woke up ,
I looked up ,
I saw my friend,
She was infront of my eyes,
I was scared ,
I asked what she was doing,
She said i dont know,
She became drunk,
She prayed to god for forgivenss and my life,
But it was hopeless,
I the friend sit here to finsh the poem,
and im afraid of the doom,
everytime i think of her,
I can not bare,
To hear the scream ,
God , let her rest carefully in your hands,
She never listened to any bad bands,
You should of taken me instead i said,
I miss her so much...
God be with her forever...

I wrote this cause my mom got into a bad accident , I was afraid ... Thank god she is better,

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-11-15 04:57 PM

I too am glad that she is better. It does help to write your feelings. Thankyou for sharing with us. Welcome to Passions.

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