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Jerry
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since 1999-11-12
Posts 2


0 posted 1999-11-12 08:51 PM


MY CYBER ANGEL

I KNOW THIS LOVE THAT'S BEEN CONCEIVED,
THROUGH MILES OF ENDLESS WIRE,
IN MY HEART I DO BELIEVE,
I CAN GET NO HIGHER,

THE WAY YOU LAUGH, THE WAY YOU TALK,
THAT PROVES ONE THING TO ME,
THAT YOU AND I THROUGH JUST ONE CLICK,
ARE TRULY MEANT TO BE,

THE HOURS THAT WE'VE SPENT TOGETHER,
MOST EACH AND EVERY NIGHT,
I FEEL AS IF YOUR PART OF ME,
LIKE I'VE KNOWN YOU ALL MY LIFE,

TO BE WITH YOU THROUGH GOOD AND BAD,
I DREAM OF EVERY NIGHT,
THE TIME IS HERE, THE TIME IS NOW,
FOR US TO DO WHAT'S RIGHT,

IT MATTERS NOT, WHAT LOOKS YOU HAVE,
IT'S THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO,
I LOVE YOU FOR THE WAY YOU ARE,
I LOVE YOU, CAUSE YOUR YOU,

SO LISTEN CLOSE, AND SEARCH YOUR HEART,
IN CASE YOU'VE MISSED MY THOUGHTS,
THE NEXT FOUR LINES CAN'T BE MISTOOK,
NO WAY TO GET THEM CROSSED,

TO YOU I SAY, I HOPE YOU KNOW,
I WANT TO SHARE MY LIFE,
MY CYBER-ANGEL, CAN'T YOU SEE,
I WANT YOU FOR MY WIFE.

AUTHOR : Jerry Wence
please submit any comments you have on my poem... thank you.

[This message has been edited by Jerry (edited 11-12-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Jerry - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-15 04:54 PM


Well Jerry....it is true you get to know people by talking to them on line. The problem in this is that there is a dimention missing in cyber relationships. I am not saying that something that begins in cyber space isn't real. what I am saying is that you can not marry a person you have never met or spent any real time with. It is so very easy to not be true.
crazy
Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 20
catawissa, pa, usa
2 posted 1999-11-16 08:32 PM


good poem, but i can disagree with Marylin, if u really love your cyber angel, and u do want to marry her. there's no reason why u couldn't meet her. but i like it. good job.
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-16 08:39 PM


Crazy...I never said you couldn't meet her. I said you must meet and spend some real time with before making a life decision. Marriage is not something to be taken lightly my friend.
crazy
Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 20
catawissa, pa, usa
4 posted 1999-11-16 08:41 PM


sorry
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