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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny 
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close your eyes,tell me wat do you see do u see u and me I see us walking together,hand in hand in the city going about as we planed if you only knew the way that i feel can it be love,can it be real My eyes will open and then they close with you on my mind,but know1 knows to me u r day,to me u r night to me u r everything,everything right to me u r my sunshine,even my rain driving me crazy,but still keepin me sane you are my love,you make me complete every time i see u,my heart skips a beat now i must sleep,to dream of you and at the same time i hope u dream of me 2 ------------------ I wish i were a poet |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
wonderfully beautiful! ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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STACY Junior Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 10veiNNie,ny |
i think im faling in love with you because everytime i read one of your poems i strat to get tears in my eyes that is how good you are. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
STACY, haveing read your previous comment that you are the kind of girl who likes fun with no strings attached, I find it terribly difficult to believe that you could possibly love someone you don't know on the basis of a few (sorry Mike) mediocre poems. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
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