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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-11-12 11:53 AM


Mixed up emotions,
all because of you.
I'm depressed and enraged,
cause i thought your love was true.
Why cant you just call?
Dont you love me at all?
Day after Day,
night after night,
not knowing where you are,
and even if you're all right.
Why should I care?
Tell me this,
why should I forgive you,
when you keep doing it.
I've gotten stronger,
so i will not care anymore,
i'll try not to cry or think of you.

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Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-11-12 01:42 PM


is it just me or does it feel like you havent ended the poem?

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Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-11-15 05:05 PM


It is very natural to feel enraged in a situation like this. You need to stay strong and realize when someone is playing you. Thinking about the relationship is a good thing. You can then see the mistakes that were made and try not to repeat them again. Good luck in your struggle.
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