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Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

0 posted 1999-11-11 09:38 PM


Inside Ice

Calm, cool, ice
No feelings touch me
Cold, empty, snow
Nothing escapes me
Chiseled from gusty life
Shaped from clay
frozen
I'm an ice princess
Will the wind never release me?

Collected, you say
Indifferent to you
Withdrawn from the world
you wish
you scream
you wish
you leave
I'm an ice princess
Will the fractures never stop?

Touches to reach for
Pulling away from the warmth
afraid I would melt
Caresses dreamed at night
Waking alone, lonely
crying the parts that have thawed
Words straining to say
Only to write on paper
thrown away needlessly
Chances wanted again
To do something different
the mistakes permanent
I'm an ice princess
Will the feelings ever return again?

Raging inside
Beneath is a heat I ache
Under the ice is a child
wanting
crying
dreaming
sleeping
cold
Skin deep there is a heart
Frozen in ice
Afire with cold
Dying alone
There is a fire deep
Blazing and passionate
the fire burns
eternal
Not to be snuffed in the harshest storm
the ice melts, renews, thaws, cracks
the fire lives still
I'm an ice princess
Will the fire inside never bloom?

I'm an ice princess
Locked in an ice tower
outside it rages a blizzard
I'm a china doll
Cracking under the strain
the shards falling bit by bit
I'm a lonely child
Wishing on an invisible star
only to wake from a dream
I'm a tortured soul
Love chained on a cold leash
dying a painful death
I'm a nightingale
With so many things to say
but no tongue to say it
I'm a snow maiden
Beautiful as purity
no color of my own
I'm myself
Melting away into oblivion
teardrops staining my heart
I'm an ice princess
Will I ever find myself?

Inside, there is a fire
slowly dimming in storm's power
Inside, there is a child
wasting away in broken dreams
Inside, there is a woman
with so much love to give
Inside, there is a princess
alone in an empty castle
Inside, there is lovely heart
frozen in ice
Inside is me
I'm an ice princess

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"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness"

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Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-11-12 12:09 PM


... i loved the line:
inside there is a child
wasting away in broken dreams

that was beautiful
great job!!


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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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bluesky
New Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 2
Norway
2 posted 1999-11-12 03:52 PM


I am really impressed!!
What a great poem!
:-)

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