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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Part 1 Keeping each other company. walking together. Your arm around me. Holding hands. Looking into your eyes. I don't say anything. But when I'm with you, I don't have to. We keep all our thoughts to ourselves. It's better that way. That certain kind of silence. Part 2 Keeping each other company again. walking side by side. I don't have to do anything, to make you understand. You just do. You're the only one. you seem to read my mind. It's scary. They think they know me. they think they understand. Only you do. so come and understand me. Part 3 We stopped driving. Only to talk. Only for a few minutes. I said I'd be back. When I came back, all understanding had left with you. So come back please! and understand me. No one else does. And I feel so alone!!! ------------------------------------------- i was once in a relationship and it was kinda akward for the both of us. We seemed to understand each other entirly. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is omethign I can really relate to. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
I also know just how that feels, the person that knew the most about me, and was always there left me as if no freindship had ever been. But I imagine that if they left me and wont coem back then they never really understood me, or they would have understood how much thier leaving hurt. Great job on teh poem... ------------------ ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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