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Lilli Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21Melbourne, Australia |
The paper is kinda wet I think I cried all over it I'm trying to write something But don't know whether I'm happy or sad I'm kinda confused Why am I crying? Then I remember what you said I know my life isn't perfect I'm kinda distraught My mum screams and yells My dad storms out the door But he's there, holding me upright I'm kinda lonely So I sit out in the paddock And blurt out all my problems To my beautiful chestnut mare She's kinda cute Her finely chiseled features She listens intently, feels my confusion She nickers into my shoulder He's kinda wonderful He holds me so close Like he's protecting me from the world He makes me feel so safe Like nothing could hurt me again These two creatures in my life My boy and my horse More than I could ever ask for Are the two things that keep me alive ------------------ There's a pretty girl on the face of the magazine What I see is my dirty hands turning the page |
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roxane Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505us |
aww- i really kinda liked this one. the only suggestion that i have is to connect the two parts about your boy. this one is really beautiful.  |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
It's a little confusing to me. |
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