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Teen Poetry #2

October 30,1999

Mike Pickering
Junior Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 18
Redlands, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-11-08 08:59 PM

I really need your help on this one, I'm planing on giving this to a girl tomorrow.October 30 1999,
A day when it felt like you were mine,
I had nothing to fear,
When I held you near,

It felt like just you and me,
For the dance that seemed to last an eternity,
I put my hands on your hips,
Oh how bad I want to touch your lips,

But something prevented me,
From obtaining my destiny,
No ones to blame but myself,
I have to put my feelings on the shelf,

For another day,
When I could say,
The words I fear,
But hold so dear,

I would look into your eyes,
My stomach full of butterflies,
My heart would be racing,
From the thought of us embracing,

“Will you be mine?”
But what if you decline,
My heart would be broken,
It’s too late now the words have been spoken

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 1999-11-08 10:56 PM

if any girl would say no to that sort of emotion. then she is crazy. I liked this peom aloy, keep up the good work...

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

2 posted 1999-11-09 04:17 PM

I know it's past time. But that was awesome.
My poem is entitled under Dying. Read it sometime.

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

3 posted 1999-11-09 05:54 PM

That was absolutely wonderful! I would never say no to a poem like that! Feel free to read any of my poems.

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