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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-11-08 05:54 PM


Hazy eyes cry for you,
I love you so much it hurts.
Tears fall down,
I dont care,
I would die for you.
I need you like the air I breathe,
I hope you understand.
Please stay with me forever.
I'm trying not to cry right now,
because so many need not know,
I love I hold for you in my heart,
the love I can not show.
If I can hold u in my arms,
for just one second tonight,
i will be so happy honey,
everything will be all right



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Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-08 06:57 PM


Nice Job!
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-11-09 10:23 PM


how very sweet
nice job

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HCwildchild
Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55
Pennsylvania,USA
3 posted 1999-11-10 08:55 AM


This was very well written! I know exactly how you feel. Keep up the good work! and try to keep strong, I'm pullin for ya, we're all in this together.

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Heather C.

Ladybug16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 15
Nacogdoches, TX 75964
4 posted 1999-11-10 09:57 AM


Wow, I know exactly how you feel. Read my poem Breaking Up.
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