navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » For Justin
Teen Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic For Justin Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 1999-11-08 12:18 PM


Once we were great friends.
Once you knew my secrets.
We were so very close,
why did it have to end?

Friendship was the only thing there though.
I know that hurt your pride.
But we seemed to get closer then,
even after I told you no.

Then another came into your life.
You forgot all of your real friends.
You left us all in the dust,
all of us who helped you through your strife.

So now you wander darkend halls.
And I wait for your return.
Maybe she is really a nice person,
but will she be there through all of your
hurts, your stumbles, and your falls???

© Copyright 1999 April - All Rights Reserved
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
1 posted 1999-11-08 12:19 PM


This one was written about a guy who was my best friend (besides my fiance)only a few months ago. But now he can't spare 2 minutes to talk to any of his friends because his girlfriend is such a jealous little hussy and he doesn't have the *cough cough* guts to simply say hi to us when she is around. Agghhh! ::pulls hair out in frustration:: Anyone have any ideas or advice?!?!
LinaInverse
Junior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 18

2 posted 1999-11-08 12:25 PM


You are real good ...
I like that poem ...
Well ... LATERZ!

Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
3 posted 1999-11-08 03:43 PM


If he's not willing to talk to his friends just because of his girlfriend, maybe you're not meant to be friends. I can see that you want to be, so just go up to him and ask him why he's ignoring you, and if he is willing to stop. If he says no, just give him a big smile and walk away. You should always leave with a smile so he will remember you smiling. I've heard that some guys just remeber that last moment that they had with someone special.
Allysa
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Senior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden
4 posted 1999-11-10 08:41 AM


Is it just me or do all Justins (justons) break hearts? I would call him up and Talk to him and explain to him that he can't let his "hussy" push him around. I once dated a Juston and now he's dating my best friend,hmmmm. Maybe you ,him and the hussy should sit down and talk. Just a suggestion
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
5 posted 1999-11-10 06:41 PM


That's just it... I have tried to talk to him. Repeatedly. I don't know what else I can do. ::shruggs:: In any case, I know I did my best and tried my hardest to keep our friendship. If he decides to remember all of his friends, that's great and I'll be more than willing to forget all this. But if he doesn't then I guess that is just his loss in the end. ::sighs:: Hopefully it will all work out. Thank you for all of you ideas and thoughts though!! ::smiles::
wildrose
New Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 2

6 posted 1999-11-12 08:44 AM


talk to his girlfriend, maybe u could be friends with her (u could try anyway)
pharon
Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
7 posted 1999-11-14 02:46 PM


Take into consideration that this may just be some infatuation that your friend will get over. Let him know that you will still be there for him when he needs you and still care about him. I hope everything goes well for you and that you friend comes to his senses. )
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
8 posted 1999-11-14 03:43 PM


April, I was once in a similar relationship as Justin is, only with a girl friend....She was very jealous and domineering, and I was a doormat.....I was around her far too long, and became warped, basically there to serve her every need...now I realize this may not be the situation with Justin, but if you notice her bossing him around, and him obeyeing like a maimed dog.....do whatever you have to to get him out of that relationship- just trust me on this one.

------------------
Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » For Justin

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary