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luv2luvu
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since 1999-11-07
Posts 7
wayne, mi, usa

0 posted 1999-11-07 09:41 PM


too many rumors
too many lies
too many heartbreaks
too many cries

too many times i've tried to keep us together
but it always falls apart
too many times i've tried to keep you
close and near my heart

too many things for people to say
too many times i've ignored them
and looked the other way

too many tears left for me to shed
too many more nights to toss and turn in bed

never paid attention
when they said you'd do me wrong
now i know they were right
what im saying is "so long"

too many is now so little
'cause your no longer here
even though i'll still love you
i wont have to drop a single tear

it's better off this way i know
your happy,i guess i am too
i'll never go through this again
i can finally say we're through

© Copyright 1999 luv2luvu - All Rights Reserved
Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-07 09:51 PM


You write poetry very well. Your poems are so touching.
luv2luvu
New Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 7
wayne, mi, usa
2 posted 1999-11-08 04:43 PM


thank you very much laura, you write very well too.thank you for reading!!

[This message has been edited by luv2luvu (edited 11-08-1999).]

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