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JJ
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since 1999-11-05
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AZ

0 posted 1999-11-07 06:04 PM


I realize you're gone
Although it's had to grasp
I know there was a time when I was loved
And that that time has passed.
You told me not to cry
That I could be brave
But I looked on the mirror and looking back, it just wasn't me.
You said I'd find someone new,
But I don't see how.
You were the one and only person
I ever truely loved
Now it's over and done.
But Daddy I still love you.

© Copyright 1999 JJ - All Rights Reserved
Laura Mitchell
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-07 06:10 PM


very touching
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-11-07 08:47 PM


This is so sad- HUGS

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



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