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Teen Poetry #2

Waisting your Life

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

0 posted 1999-11-07 08:55 AM

Getting drunk is one of the worst things you can do.
It can harm yourself and anyone around you.

Driving while intoxicated puts lives in danger.
You could kill yourself, or a complete stranger.

You can also go to jail for many years,
which is definitely not worth drinking a few beers.

If you drink make sure it's in moderation,
or you'll be in handcuffs at a police station.

You'll end up in jail,
with no soul offering to pay your bail.

All because you thought you'd have some fun,
and drink untill the night was done.

Your future is completely up to you,
so just make sure you know what it is you must do!

*If some parts sound redundant, I did that purposely to make my point more clear.

JJ
New Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 6
AZ

1 posted 1999-11-07 06:14 PM

this is really good and you're making a good point. One of my friends was killed by a drunk driver.

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

2 posted 1999-11-07 09:46 PM

Oh, I'm sorry. I wrote it for an English journal entry. It was about the closing to a book I read called, Princess Ashley. I decided to put it on here hoping people would read it. I'm glad you did.

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