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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
This poem is about a drill team coach that I had last year. Some people in this world you can not trust, but this one you surely must. She is soft and so gentle, like a fresh flower petal. She's cool and ever so sweet, like a nice cold ice cream treat. She's kind all of the time, and that I'm sure is no crime. She is so inspiring, which is quite admiring. She's definitely one of a kind, because people like her are really hard to find. She's helped me to find my way, in the way life is everyday. She helped me to find who I am, which is the world's traffic jam. In that, I'd like to thank her, for I'll she's had to offer. I thank you for every helping hand you've had to lend, but overall for just being my friend. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Might I ask what this line means? It makes no sense to me. She helped me to find who I am, which is the world's traffic jam. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Laura Mitchell Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76Cincinnati OH,45238 |
It means basically what it says. The world is filled with people trying to act like everybody else. She helped me to be myself, and that holds a lot of people up, like a traffic jam. I hope that makes a little more sense. |
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