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Shasta
Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24
st augustine florida

0 posted 1999-11-06 05:49 PM



~Now
I understand now why your this way, the hate you display.

I know the hurt you feel and why you think you cant deal.
If only you'd give love one more chance, And open up once more,
I know
Your hearts sore, but just give sumone the chance to mend it.
I now understand why you think your all alone, can't open to me I don't want you to love me, just for you, to see that what your doing is not the way.
I understand NO

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You Live, You Love. You Die, what have you given


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Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-07 08:43 AM


nice poem! It sounds a lot like "locked."
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