Lovesick - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Teen Poetry #2

Lovesick

ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

0 posted 1999-11-05 04:24 PM

I love the way she loves me,
the way she looks into my heart,
the way she listens to my soul.

She is always there for me,
when my burdens came to strong,
when my lonlyness was too long.
But now she has made me sick,
not a sickness concerning my body,
but from a sickness within.
now I am love sick.

I now suffer from pure love and happiness,
a miracle from above,
she is my very own princess.
Knowing that we can not see each other,
knowing that we can not touch her, feel her, hug her, kiss her,
my heart cries out for her,
but all I can do is wait for her,
and cry in my bed, and dream up thoughts of how we would meet.
She makes my life complete,
yet worlds apart I still only dream.

But what keeps me alive is the fact that our love has no boundries,
more ever lasting than the limits of space,
too much for words, it can only and i mean only be witnessed in her face, her eyes.
Our love will transend time,
it is tonger than chains,
and is as beautiful as God.

Our love is free, nothing can incase it,
Too search for that look in her eyes, and the touch of her skin,
I’d climb any mountain, to stee, too rough.
I’d swim any ocean, toocold, too far,
I’d walk through hell, and bare its burns,
and leave my life to bare its pleas to come back.
I love her soo much,
the word love is now a primitive corpse of a word to describe it,
so I only use these words to substitute this unknown I feel inside.

*********************************************

Let us be
let us be.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-05 11:35 PM

True love is a wonderful, ye ugly thing. I really love the last two lines.

May I ask what inspired this line? "and is as beautiful as God" Just curious.

------------------
Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.