navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » To Be Loved By You
Teen Poetry #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic To Be Loved By You Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
chollagrl4
Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-11-05 12:25 PM


To gaze into your eyes,
your love would be so true.
How I wish to be loved by you.
To feel your gentle lips,
softly kiss away my tears.
To be loved by you would take away my fears.
To hear you say I love you,
and know your words are true,
how I wish to be loved by you.
To smile and be happy,
at your sweet embrace.
To see a smile upon your face.
To be loved by you,
this is a dream to me.
To be loved by you,
would set my spirit free.

© Copyright 1999 chollagrl4 - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-05 01:57 PM


A lovely tribute to your feelings.
Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-11-05 02:20 PM



Lovely....I enjoyed this much....Great poem.

------------------
NOT IN VAIN
If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life
from aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Into his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
~Emily Dickinson

shyone
Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 10

3 posted 2000-01-03 10:05 PM


Beautiful poem.  Sounds like something that everyone can relate to...Especially myself.
Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-01-03 10:20 PM


Lovely work.  This is definitely something a lot of us can relate to.

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha



eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
5 posted 2000-01-04 05:44 AM


I echo all the above views!  
Hope to see more.  

Blue Eyed Wanderer
Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84
Rhode Island, US
6 posted 2000-01-04 02:49 PM


Like most other people, I can also relate. Don't just stay there admiring the guy--do something about it! You never know, maybe these wishes will become reality   Great poem!
~Jess~

April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
7 posted 2000-01-04 06:38 PM


Very pretty poem.... I can't say anything that hasn't already been said, but it really is good!  smiles I can definitely relate!
April

 ...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #2 » To Be Loved By You

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary