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Kevin
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since 1999-11-02
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Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-11-03 12:29 PM


its funny how when growing up
we never think we are
its always somehow years away
still never very far.
and years of tears and self seen smiles
just pass as they unfold
but when reflected back upon
are seen as growing old.
and in the end there’s nothing
but the things you’ve taken hold
for memories of memories
keep us from getting old.
some kisses will last forever
some tears never run dry
for when always in remembrance
who can truly die?

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-03 12:19 PM


Bravo....Very true sediments here.
Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-11-03 09:30 PM


Kevin, this is a very nice poem, especially the finishing lines. I haven't gotten around to reading your posts in open, I will try. Welcome to Passions (belated)

LOL Marilyn, sediments? I believe those are small particles of dirt or sand-
Perhaps you meant "sentiments"

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-03 09:59 PM


Ahhh Amy...you are right...*hanginf my head in shame*. I try so hard to do everything and my brain was exhausted yesterday when I posted here. My apologies...Spelling has always been my weakness. adore English...hate spelling and grammer...lol...and I want to be a writer!!..lmao.
Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
4 posted 1999-11-04 12:03 PM


wow! so true
very nice

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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JEBE
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since 1999-11-02
Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA
5 posted 1999-11-04 11:07 AM


WOW...I love it and its so true. great work i look forward to reading more of your work.
jebe

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