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JEBE
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA

0 posted 1999-11-02 06:25 PM


she stole the happiest moments in my life
and hushed my sincere smiles to sleep
then grabbed my hand....only to keep me fallin
her excuse for this was all so cheap
she stabbed a knife thru my heart,
and spit on my cheaks to create tears
the only one i gave a key to my soul
i listened with all open ears
she never cared,she doesn't now
she smiles cause shes better
and throws it in my face....only....
to create this game of tug and war
who will be the next to fall?
whos soul will be the next to die?
who will be the next to lose this bloodless battle?
how many times have i asked why.....
do i still love her

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-11-02 08:13 PM


Oh....wow...I can relate...listen to me...I've been through it-GET OUT! Now!!!! Trust me, once you have made the break...it will work out. It did for me.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-11-02 10:01 PM


I hear your pain in this. I have been where you are. I echo systematic deacys words. Get out and start your life over.
JEBE
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA
3 posted 1999-11-02 11:17 PM


thankyou guys....yea believe me i got out awhile ago....
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