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Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

0 posted 1999-10-30 06:00 PM


Many think that love is physical
but to me it's something magical.
Not just bodies emerged together,
but to souls destined for forever.

Wiping away the others tears,
comforting them through all of their fears.
Holding them without having to go further,
just comforted with being together.

Needing somone for all their joy,
not just a person to use as a toy.
When giving to them makes you smile,
and nothing about them puts you in denial.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~



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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
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1 posted 1999-10-30 09:53 PM


Indeed, love is not a physical thing. It is a very sacred thing, in my view, and the word love should not be tossed about as freely as it is.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-10-31 01:20 AM


Love is something that we all look for in our lives. You are very right, love is not physical. Many young people and old alike struggle with what love truely is. I believe love is unslefish, giving, comforting, undemanding. May you find true love in your life journey.
April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
3 posted 1999-10-31 01:41 AM


I really like this one... and it is so true. It should not be merely physical, and if it really is love, then both people will realize that and it will be so much more. I can't tell you how much I wish everyone could know that. Great poem tho, keep it up!


Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
4 posted 1999-11-02 10:59 AM


thanks ya'll, glad you liked it....

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~



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