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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-28 09:36 PM


Us meeting was a huge mistake,
But you can’t blame me,
My error was easy to make.

You were one of those people,
The kind whom you can’t have anything with but lust,
And the kind which you can’t trust.

I regret I ever met you,
But hey, you live and you learn
And that’s what I intend to do.

I’m going to forget you,
Because this whole thing was just a mistake,
A mistake which many make.

As time goes by,
So does everything else.
Good bye, and hope to see you never.
Nothing is forever, and neither is the memory of you.
You were just a mistake,
Which I learned from, and this error I will never again make.


© Copyright 1999 Olga - All Rights Reserved
April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
1 posted 1999-10-31 08:45 PM


very good, but depressing! It's too bad that most everyone finds someone like this in their life at some point. But it shows a lot of strength to completely put it behind you!

Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
2 posted 1999-10-31 11:29 PM


Thank you, I AM trying to put it behind me, but I'm not sure if I'm succesful.

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You gotta kiss a lot of frogs before you find your prince.

Tina TT
Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 1999-11-01 10:07 PM


Hey...not bad! I'm glad to see you're not pining over him/her/it (hehe).
Well done

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~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~

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