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eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore

0 posted 1999-10-27 09:22 AM


Just because i love u

I won't die for u
At least not to prove that my love is true
but just because i love you

I won't cry for u
At least not because i've been hurt by u
but just becaus i love you

I won't say goodbye
At least not for everything we've been through
but just because i love you

I won't break your heart
Not unless the sun suddenly turns blue
but just because i love you

[This message has been edited by eagle (edited 10-30-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 eagle - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-10-27 09:49 AM


Wow! i really liked this poem...


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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-10-29 10:51 PM


This is very good. I would suggest Capitalization though. It would enhance this lovely poem.
eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
3 posted 1999-10-30 05:58 AM


Thanks for the advice...
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