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April Resi
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 1999-10-25 06:06 PM


Here comes another round,
here we go again
I can't describe the pain inside,
the pain I have within.

The hurt I feel now is so much,
I can hardly breathe
The fire inside is dying now,
please come rescue me.

When your arms encircle me,
only love shines through
The world itself stops moving,
it's only me and you.

A single glance from you my love,
and the world's no longer cold,
Your hands are in my hair now love,
my spirit even glows.

My problems are not gone it's true,
but why can't they all see
Little things and petty people
no longer bother me.

"Life is short and then you die,"
everyone always tells me
So help my find my childhood now,
let my soul be free.

© Copyright 1999 April - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-10-25 06:29 PM


oooh very nice!

especially good rhythm

great job.. keep it up

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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