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You Are my Angel
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You Are my Angel |
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
you are my special angel, you and me, were quite unseprable, as we talk for hours on end, I’ve grown to like and love a friend. As i treat love as a serious emotion, will accept my love and devotion? As serios as true as a mummies curse, I’ll love you honey, for better, or worse. I wanna kiss your lips and hold you tight, and hope as heck that you’ll think its right. So as long as we breath, I’ll love you hun, till we meet again, this heart will beat for one. |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
I love the way that you expresses how you feel in this poem. I've read many of your peoms and have enjoyed all of them, you seem to have a way of exposing all that is wrapped up in your heart with words. I hope to see more... ------------------ ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
I like how Maitay put it.... you let out everything in your heart through your writing, and it really is great! I wanna see more! |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Great poem. I loved it especially because that is exactly how I felt for a girl exactly how i felt for her,Love. ------------------ life is short kill quick [This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 10-25-1999).] |
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ANON Junior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 30NZ |
thanx again ppl for your input, I really enjoy writing because it does not take much effort to express certain things esp about love, and most of all, i love all your work aswell, keep it up fellow poets!! |
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