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Teen Poetry #2

Sick

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-23 11:43 PM

Hunger hinders healing hours
Sick, since Sunday sitting still
Feeling funny; funky flowers
Spread the sickening smell of swill

Coughing crudely, crying coarsely
Sending swirling sneezes still
Moaning meekly, missing mostly
Sultry sunlight’s silent spill

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-24 02:01 AM

Master, I like this very much.

I hope you don't mind if I make this request, but is there any possibility of getting you to reply to more poems? At LEAST 2 or 3 a day? Teen 2 is dying. What is the point if posting your poetry when no one replies? Please help me cure this problem.

See my topic:ANYONE WHO CARES ABOUT TEEN 2 READ THIS

Thanks

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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