Out With The Old, and in with The New(please post comments)

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Teen Poetry #2

Out With The Old, and in with The New(please post comments)

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-23 11:26 AM

He's so sweet and caring to me.
He writes me poetry.
He brings me roses and teddy bears.
I can see that he actually CARES.
And when I'm down or in tears,
He scares away all my worries and fears.
He is the perfect guy for me,
And together we will be.

What have you ever done to show you care?
All you did was steal my heart,
And tear it apart.
You just wanted to score,
Once you got some,
You wanted more and more.

The only thing I wanna say to you
Is that I'm out with the old,
And in with the new.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-23 05:46 PM

Olga, I can really relate to the first stanza. As for the second one, I can't and I'm sorry it happened to you.

I am going to make a request, to you and every one: PLEASE, PLEASE REPLY TO MORE POEMS!!!!!!

See my post, ANYONE WHO CARES ABOUT TEEN2 READ THIS

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-10-23 11:56 PM

theres really nothing 2 be sorry about, cuz i feel that every thing that happens is for the better! In the begining I was really mad at that guy, but now i really don't care, cuz i heave found some1 who i really like and who cares about me.

I'll try to reply more poems
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"You cannot sedate all the things you hate."

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

3 posted 1999-10-24 02:02 AM

Olga, Please read my reply to your reply in my post. Thank you.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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