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kari
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since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 1999-10-21 07:42 PM


Know that I am trying
even if I'm crying
Know that I can write
because it is my light
Know that I am lost inside
and running on pride
Know that sins kill
so do not make them your will
Know that time is the hardest thing to bare
and we will always complain that things aren't fair
Know that memories are everlasting
the fragile ones seem to always sting
Know that pressure is always burning
and love is always yerning.
Know that I think about you every night
I dream that it will turn out right
Know that my hands are small
and life forces them to fall
Know that girfts dissapear
if you only fear...

© Copyright 1999 kari - All Rights Reserved
Star Fairy 2
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
1 posted 1999-10-21 09:26 PM


i loved this one .. nice job

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
2 posted 1999-10-21 10:51 PM


I love this! especially the part about "that memories are everlasting and that fragile ones sting" why is that?? I guess no one really knows, great job!


starboards

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

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