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eagle
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since 1999-10-20
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0 posted 1999-10-20 11:47 PM


You came like a storm

You came like a storm just blowing by
Brought the sunshine back to the sky
You captured my mind, heart and soul
How you did it, I will never know

I was unworthy, din suit your taste
The love and time I spent all went to waste
But like a child intrigued be a toy
I, just like any other typical boy
Couldn’t bear to be apart or say goodbye
You are the apple of my eye.

A pen contains limited ink
It is no different from my heart I think
It write it's words until it dries
I've run out of tears for me to cry
When the love letters are done and the pen is gone
My mailbox is lonely and I am forlorn
My math's no good, I can't count chance
I have no hope to put on romance.

A year ago, right about today
I was in complete, total disarray
How can a short year seem so long
for a bird to finish singing it's song
Nobody else can take your place
for in my mind I see your face
Beautiful and pretty with eyes aglow
It breaks my heart and tears freely flow

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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
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1 posted 1999-10-21 12:19 PM


How sad. But at the same time it is a beautiful poem. Welcome to the forum.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

eagle
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since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
2 posted 1999-10-21 12:31 PM


thanks for the comments! =)

Blue Eyed Wanderer
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 84
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3 posted 1999-10-21 05:30 PM


A pen contains limited ink
It is no different from my heart I think
It write it's words until it dries
I've run out of tears for me to cry

I think the whole poem is great, but that verse especially stuck out in my mind. It makes you think. Great job!

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