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Misty
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA

0 posted 1999-10-19 08:21 PM


CHANGES

The hopelessness in your voice has changed,
Now I hear happiness and joy.
Where once lied a frown,
Now lays a heartwarming smile.
Talk used to be about the hard trails, and wanting to give up,
Now you've over come your trials and have achieved much!
Where I once saw pain in your eyes,
Now I see hope and dreams.
I used to know this little frightened girl,
Now all I see is a cheerful, greatful friend.
I thought I had lost you my friend,
But all it took was time to heal and a little bit of change.
I was sad you had left,
but now Im glad,
because now the real you is back!
I missed you Brooke my friend!
And it's GREAT to have you BACK!

©Misty

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Dear Brooke,
It's good to have you back and smiling!! I told you things would get better. Always remember Im
here for you. And don't forget about me in your new life! Thanks for not giving up, and for being
such a great friend! I love ya tons!!!

Love,
Misty
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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-19 08:23 PM


Great to here that everything worked out Misty!

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-10-19 08:48 PM



Lucie....Another beautiful poem...

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Misty
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since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA
3 posted 1999-11-07 02:53 PM


What do you mean by, lucie.....another beautiful poem. ????/
Laura Mitchell
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
4 posted 1999-11-08 07:24 PM


Beautiful! How did you come about getting a copyright?
Misty
Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121
USA
5 posted 1999-11-15 07:40 PM


I just put the copyright by my name so everyone knows it's my own work and I don't want them (well some people do) steal it!
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