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chollagrl4 Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 65brick |
I see myself, a girl always hurt. I see you throw me on the dirt. If u dont wanna love me, dont pretend you do. and if u dont wanna see me, say so too. Dont try to protect, my feelings or heart. cause u always hurt them anyway, and now we are apart. Your so insensitive, your so mean to me, and thats the way itll always be. I love you. but u hurt me so much, with every word and every touch. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Nice poem...makes a great point. It hurts more in the end when someone has pretended to love you. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Gosh, do I know how that feels! I've been there just recently, and even thinking about him hurts me. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
thats a reallie nice pome. ------------------ You onnly have one llife, Think about it |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
A really good poem. It hit home and I could really relate to it. Keep up the good work!! |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Oh my gosh!!! i'm gonna cry...this one really relates to me...my boyfriend broke up w/me 3 weeks ago and he pretended to love me...it hurts...but we'll get over it...believe me...great poem...i couldnt have written it better myself!!! ************ starboards ------------------ "If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was" |
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