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Sumtimes |
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Shasta Junior Member
since 1999-10-16
Posts 24st augustine florida |
Sumtimes on a clear starry night you can see a full moon burning bright You can see all the love, all the passion, all the hate. Sumtimes its just the love. Sumtimes its just the hate. Or Sumtimes it could be both it all depends on what we're able to see. Sumtimes we cant see anything at all only because we've forgotten how to believe in what really matter and Then. We grow. And cant see anything but a blur... For a time. ------------------ You onnly have one llife, Think about it |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very interesting poem. Might I suggest using the correct spelling of sometimes?  ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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