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Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-17 01:27 PM

LOL
Laughing out loud
Living in a fantasy
That reality does cloud

LOL
Laughing at my life
A smile here and there
Strewn about with strife

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Laughing in a fit
Laughing like a maniac
Yet it matters not a bit

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Laughing is such fun
I speak my hateful peace
Then I curse my tongue

LOL
Laughing at my words
Laughing at this poem
And the messages unheard

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

1 posted 1999-10-17 02:31 PM

Again as always sys great work
BTW I hope your great poetry can turn this forum around

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life is short kill quick

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

2 posted 1999-10-17 08:40 PM

Interesting poem dear.
I enjoyed it very much. Especially how you're using the silly net-abbreviations for a more serious use.
anyway, keep up the good work.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-10-17 08:43 PM

This caught my eye right away..extremely clever and well thought out..wonderful work.

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*Krista Knutson*

I walk with the multitude, yet alone am I in their midst. -- Daniel L. Miller

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

4 posted 1999-10-17 09:46 PM

All I can say is that it is a rather amusing poem that is nice to see once in a while, grazing the pages, seeing that once more a light hearted and fun poem has come our way.. Continue on with the wonderful poetry my freind......

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-10-18 12:13 PM

CUTE......I thought it was CUTE....
and very amuzing.

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

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