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RedRose
New Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 6
St augustine Florida USA

0 posted 1999-10-14 05:17 PM


Look at me
Tell me what you see.
Do you see me as a child?
Or
As the women I am

Why do you treat me?
Like I have no say so.
Iam a person to. Just like you.
I'am old enough to
Care.
Maybe our thoughts are different.
But other than that
We are the same.

Look at me; tell me what you see.
Am I just a child in your eyes?

When will you see that I am more then?
A child.

I am a Woman


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Be BLind For A Moment, so you can see with your heart.

© Copyright 1999 RedRose - All Rights Reserved
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-16 07:33 PM


RedRose, as a new member Im assuming you don't know the precedures here in passions, and thought I would explain to you. Multiple posting like you just did is highly frowned upon, and BELIEVE ME it will cut down on the number of people who will reply to you. Try to limit the postings, and reply to other peoples' poems....it is only common courtesy. Thanks.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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