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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-10-12 11:14 PM


Just think about it,
me and you.
Think of all that we've been through.
Sometimes when i cryed,
I realize you were mad.
But you didnt even hug me,
when i was crying and so sad.
Just think about it,
you and I.
if you left right now,
I know I'd die.
My love for you is eternal,
but i love you ever more.
Please hold me next time im crying,
because my heart is always sore.
I came into this love,
knowing someday it would end.
But somehow in the beginning,
I thought my heart could mend.
Now it is too late,
to say my heart wont break.
But its worth my pain and suffering,
if only for your sake.
Cause id climb the highest mountain,
swim the deepest sea.
If I could see a smile on ur face,
if your love would be stronger for me.

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Tal
Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27
Singapore
1 posted 1999-10-13 12:17 PM


Thank you. For posting this poem which makes me cry when I think that these word could be what my ex-girlfriend was thinking when I broke up with her. Thank you, for making me realise what a fool I've been.. Thank you.
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