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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-12 08:47 PM



False Idea of Love

I see our loves decline
as an opportunity to be free.
An opportunity to live life
on my own, with no help.

For your help is something
I no longer want or need.
It is something that is now,
no longer useful in my life.

You left me first, then you
came crawling back to me.
But, I want let you back in
my life to cause more pain.

I once loved you, but that
feeling has faded with time.
My broken heart built a wall
when it reconstructed itself.

My heart will no longer except
your false idea of love.
It will not allow you to play
me like you did before.

Just deal with it. Get over it.
Live with it. Learn from it.
Because I had to, with your
false idea of love......

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Tal
Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27
Singapore
1 posted 1999-10-13 02:55 AM


Ouch. You hit me where it hurts, you know that? I happened to be one such jerk who did such a thing.. I still love her... but I know that I won't be with her again.. or can't, or don't want to... whatever..
StratMatt
Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-10-18 01:05 AM


Hmm... well, I once did that to a girl, she let me back in her life, and then I corrected my ways, interesting how things work, because it reversed. Anyway, I enjoyed the poem.
As for the title, if Aaron's the guy that did this to you, It's kind of weird putting the name up. I don't really think that's a neighborly thing to do, but if you know that he'll never come here and no one that knows him will either, I guess it doesn't matter.


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"I went into the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front the essential facts of life, and to see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I never lived." -Henry David Thoreau
"All comedians want to be rock stars, because they're cool. They always look like they're about to vomit. They have that rap before the song that doesn't make any sense 'A long time ago, there were lots of people, but that was a long time ago.'" -Dana Carvey

Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
3 posted 1999-10-18 06:13 PM


Matt...Well, the part in ( ) was part of the original poem. I just shortened it when I wrote it here, because it looked better. Anyways, Aaron was the guy, and I gave this poem to him....

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

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