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Tal
Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27
Singapore

0 posted 1999-10-11 11:28 PM


I'm sorry falling for an old love
I'm sorry for not being able to tell you
I'm sorry for the tears I made you shed
For the things I made you feel
I'm sorry I almost asked you to be mine again
I'm sorry I didn't tell you you were beautiful
I'm sorry for loving you
For you loving me
I'm sorry I was angry that you had someone new
I'm sorry I thought I was being fair to you
I'm sorry for loving someone more
I'm sorry for lying to you
For telling you I didn't love you anymore
I'm sorry I can't tell you in person
I'm sorry for being terrible with words
I'm sorry for asking you now to forget I exist
For being unable to look you in the eye
I'm sorry for not knowing my own heart
I'm sorry for making you suffer for it
I'm sorry for being a coward
I'm sorry for not daring to tell you this to your face
I'm sorry for crying, when you were crying too
For adding to your sorrow
I'm sorry for so many things
I'm sorry I can't even finish this
I'm sorry for failing you
I'm sorry

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Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-02 08:22 PM


You are forgiven.
At least you are being very honest with your feelings,a quality growing experience
chalk it up to be.
Good expression.

babychicken_1
Junior Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 11

2 posted 2000-03-02 08:29 PM


This was so beautiful and yet, so sad. I don't know the history of whome you wrote this to or about...But some of the apologies were connectable to my life. And it brought tears to my eyes. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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