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Me and I |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
This is totally about me. I just thought it would be a good idea to share because no matter how dumb some of the things are, they are me. We all need something that just plain shows us who we are. Some things are obvious to catch but some things make you think. I got the idea from one of Jewel's poems (in the cover)in her first CD, Pieces of You. If it gets boring, I promise you don't have to read it...  My right eye is blue. My left eye is green. My hands are so small. My toes are tiny. My stomach is as hard as rock. I cry a lot. I love to laugh. I think a lot. I write for no reason but to clear my mind. My poems usually don't rhyme. My parents think I am un-trustable. I love music; especially lyrics expressed in it. I write songs on the piano & the guitar. I hate practicing the piano. I love practicing my guitar. I quit piano lessons, but I still play. I strum my guitar everyday. I love to look at the sky. I love mountains. I want to live in a big city. I love to run. I get scared easily. I hate rules. My dreams are life-threatening. My toes are always painted. My fingers are never painted. I can't forget memories. I have a few light freckles on my face; no one notices them though. I have a hint of natural gold highlights in my brown hair. My hair is long and straight. My music makes me think. I am tired because I can not find sleep. I have a good sense of direction and also humor. I have many many friends. They are all so unique. I can truly say that I have and DO love someone. My feet are stuck to the ground. My life is in the world. I push my troubles to the back of my head but they always find their way back. I try not to give my hopes heighth, in fear that they won't come true. My life has been all planned out. My eyes have sunflowers in them. I am who I want to be. I Am Me. Me Am I. ------------------ |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Kari, quite a talent you have for poetry. I have read all of your poems in this forum [and think they all are excellent] but I have had hardly any time to reply. This is a very descriptive poem and tells a lot about yourself. You should be proud! |
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Silent Silver Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 12AZ, USA |
kari, an ingenious poem about yourself. writing about myself makes me feel good, and i think you certainly know how to show us who you truly are. very nice, -SS |
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