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Olga
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since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 1999-10-08 11:30 PM



Us meeting was a huge mistake,
But you can’t blame me,
My error was easy to make.

You were one of those people,
The kind whom you can’t have anything with but lust,
And the kind which you can’t trust.

I regret I ever met you,
But hey, you live and you learn
And that’s what I intend to do.

I’m going to forget you,
Because this whole thing was just a mistake,
A mistake which many make.

As time goes by,
So does everything else.
Good bye, and hope to see you never.
Nothing is forever, and neither is the memory of you.
You were just a mistake,
Which I learned from, and this error I will never again make.


© Copyright 1999 Olga - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-02 12:12 PM


You have obviously learned
so go on and live.
Another nice piece!

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2000-03-02 12:48 PM


I agree with Paul. You have learned, so go on with your life knowing that you learned from your mitstake!   Quite a piece! I loved it!  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


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