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Teen Poetry #2

Escaping the heaven's locked cage...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-10-07 11:53 PM

Escaping the heaven’s locked cage
A golden ray pierced through a cloud
Slowly stretching towards the stage
Where a poet was reading out loud
Slowly losing its warmth and ability
The ray of light fell far from reality
Illuminating the stage with divinity
Where a soul achieved immortality

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I fell in love and kept on falling

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-02 12:07 PM

Like a well.
You know,
VERY
VERY
VERY
VERY
VERY
VERY
VERY
VERY
VERY
D E E P ! ! !

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

2 posted 2000-03-02 12:51 PM

Again, I agree with Paul...VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY DEEP! But also a good poem!

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

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Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-03-02 09:19 PM

Well done Master. Enjoyed this very much.

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2000-03-02 09:57 PM

So much said with so few words, Master. Truly superb work, as always.

*Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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