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ReDrOseS
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since 1999-10-07
Posts 4
California

0 posted 1999-10-07 08:10 PM


Will I always have this pain?
It won't go away
Should I feel ashamed
Or kneel down and pray?

This pain is leaving me bruises
I can't explain its way
There's no excuses
To say that it's okay

If this pain doesn't go
I'll try to ignore it
And if it should show
I'll try to stop it

This pain won't leave me
I'll still have it when I'm grown
It will always affect me
So I'll try to leave it alone

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Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
1 posted 2000-03-02 12:01 PM


You have not mentioned what the pain is.
BUT
To kneel down and pray
will always be the right answer.
Very nice,this is the other good way in
writing it down and sharing it.

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