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chollagrl4
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 65
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0 posted 1999-10-07 03:12 PM


I swallow the pill of life,
and as it goes down,
I feel the sadness set in and I drown.
My melancholy mood,
wont see be lifted,
now i close my eyes
and see my mind has drifted.
I'm too bruised to see,
too numb to cope.
I dont have your love,
and now I've lost all hope.
You want to love me,
but you just dont care.
You treat me like I am not there.
Now this pill of life that I will swallow,
leaves me sad,
and inside...hollow.

© Copyright 1999 chollagrl4 - All Rights Reserved
kari
Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
1 posted 1999-10-07 06:40 PM


i really liked your poem. that is totally me! thanks.
Piggy169
Junior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 10
Belleville IL USA
2 posted 1999-10-08 10:09 AM


i know how you feel just try your hardest to get through it and rember the sun will come out tomrow but only if you force it!
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