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Tal
Junior Member
since 1999-10-05
Posts 27
Singapore

0 posted 1999-10-05 05:41 AM


For love of you my heart would break
For dreams of you I'd never wake
For one embrace I'd sell my soul
All because my heart you stole
For just one day with you alone
I'd give up everything I own
For just one smile you give to me
I'd risk the dangers of stormy sea
For just one walk and hold your hand
I'd go back to when time began
For one word of love that you would say
Any sacrifice I'd pay
For just one kiss upon my cheek
I'd climb to tallest mountain's peak
For love of you all this I do
Even without love from you.

This was writen for the girl I love.
Of course, she doen't know that I do, nor does she love me.

© Copyright 1999 Tal - All Rights Reserved
Lauren
Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 21
FORT PIERCE ,FL
1 posted 1999-10-06 03:49 PM


i love this poem....i feel the same way about g uy whos very special to me....but can see it.....i think you should give this poem to that girl and see what can happen
Maitay
Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA
2 posted 1999-10-07 11:27 AM


I know what it is like to love someone and them have no comprehension of how much they have captured your heart. I just wished that I could let him know the extint of what my heart felt for him. That I would kill myself to let him live. I think this poem was one of the best that I have ever read. I love the way that you were able to express the way I have felt for the longest time. I think that Lauren is right, give this to the girl..

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~


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