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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-10-03 10:07 PM


Light dapples through entangled clouds
Tumbling gently in a silver flow
I wander upon a cleansing breeze
A phantom within reality
Golden threads are fraying
Freedom floods upon feathered wings
My soul is drifting away
Melancholy sweetness blooms
Like spicy fragrance from a rose
Lost within the silence am I
Yet somehow unafraid
The deepest comfort found in me
The binds have now broken
That once held me here
Like crystal sands
I slip through your fingers
And gently float away
Alone is how I choose to be
Gracing the lightly glittered sky
For all of time
Remember me, my cherished love,
For I live in you.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 2000-03-02 11:28 AM


ASTOUNDING!

faith
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since 2000-01-31
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2 posted 2000-03-02 02:03 PM


That was so very beautiful..
I loved it  Keep writin like that ,always...helps one ease the pain  faith




[This message has been edited by faith (edited 03-02-2000).]

sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
3 posted 2000-03-02 02:18 PM


AWESOME ALWYE!! Glad to see some of your poetry here!  

stay cool

~~Lavada~~


 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin


Dusk Treader
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4 posted 2000-03-02 11:21 PM


Beautiful poem Krista!  I can't believe I almost let this one slip by... great imagery and writing.  I really enjoyed this one!


*Abrahm Simons*
Put one foot on the path of life, tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light.



[This message has been edited by Dusk Treader (edited 03-02-2000).]

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