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That Makes Me Sad
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That Makes Me Sad |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
When negative thoughts run through my head, like love runs away from you... When I look at you and your eyes dance away like a spark of fire... When reality slams its reality, like you slam on my soul... When I become not an angel, but a lust for you... When the one thing I want in life is pounded like a nail... When advice becomes an echo, like water becomes mist... When breathing hurts cause you can't exhale... When I lack of that one word strength... When you are crying and hurt, and I don't know what to say... When I stand all alone in a great big crowd... When emotions slip through my fingers, like tears down my cheeks... When a fragrance of mind is found, and a fragment of joy is lost... When you want me to be so perfect because you fear that I'm not... When you are my light that I can never have... When a hyacinth becomes a weed... That Makes Me Sad ------------------ |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
MARVELOUS! You've made me sad too. This is powerful. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like the way you laid out this poem and the resolution. Very good! |
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