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Teen Poetry #2

Laci, I Love You

Jimmy
Junior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 42
Oak Grove

0 posted 1999-10-03 01:05 AM

There is a girl that I love soo dear,
I never want her to be far from near.
When she is away I can't forget,
She is one that I can't help but miss.
We have been dating for a while now,
I can't help but ask god how.
How could someone so damn perfect,
be with someone who's just not worth it?
Dedicated to my ONLY love, Laci

[This message has been edited by Jimmy (edited 10-03-1999).]

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

1 posted 2000-03-02 11:07 AM

SO SWEET!
Has she seen this?
god should be God.
And you should never question how he wants to bless you obviouly he has with
Laci.

Jimmy
Junior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 42
Oak Grove

2 posted 2000-04-04 11:36 PM

i wrote this poem a long time ago, and since then we have broke up, please read my other poems about our break up

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2000-04-21 03:24 AM

It was so sad to read this poem after your other ones.
It was so obvious that you loved her more than life itself.
But in your poem, you were wrong, she doesn't deserve you.

Love Always,
Michelle.

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