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Gil
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since 1999-10-02
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0 posted 1999-10-03 12:22 PM


She tells me she loves me, and I say the same
At the time I was sure, no doubts in my mind
Holding her in my arms, so tender and sweet
I whispered those words, so soft in her ear
Time has passed on, since that warm summer night
My feelings inside are so very mixed up, why can't I be sure as I once was
Maybe in time I'll figure it out, I know you'll be there when I know that it's true

© Copyright 1999 Gil - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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since 1999-12-28
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1 posted 2000-03-02 11:03 AM


You have to be HONEST
with yourself and each other.
This is nicely said and a topic
many have lived.
I think we should all try to be friends
FIRST there is no hurry, plenty of time.
PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE!

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
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2 posted 2000-03-02 11:22 AM


I have to agree with Paul on this one.  Be honest with her about your feelings- it's always best to be honest and straightforward than to beat around the bush and hurt someone even more.
~Kristi Lynn

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