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Teen Poetry #2

An Unguided Love

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

0 posted 1999-10-02 01:13 AM

An Unguided Love

I wander through the dark
Trying to make a spark
That may turn into a fire
A Desire
For someone
That will come into my life
And make it worthwhile

She has come
And quick as a flash
Stole my heart
But it longed for another
One that was everything that I ever dreamed.

But both have a place in my heart
I can’t choose one without my world falling apart.
But I was too quick.
And didn’t follow my heart

The one that I long
Is like a beautiful song
She is always on my mind
And I wish that I had taken the time
To realize that you are my one, my dream

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

1 posted 1999-10-02 01:25 AM

Please write and post your replies on my poem. I would appreciate it. Thank You. ConderE

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

2 posted 2000-03-02 10:45 AM

I like the way you write
this is good!
First you should have love for God,
Second love for yourself,
THEN other friendships and loves will be put upon you as blessings.
Anyone who has a heart that can share like yours will have no problem connecting with someone VERY special.

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