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Angel
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since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania

0 posted 1999-10-01 11:15 PM


I need now, more than ever
I want to hear the word "forever"
Each day apart seems not to end
Til the time I see you again
A thousand angels praise your name
Only wishing they were the same
Your eyes, like windows to inside
Sweet and so true, nothing left to hide
I want to know your hopes and dreams
Let me in your world; perfect as it seems
I want to cover you face in kisses
And fufill all your secret wishes
I can't stop thinking about you and I
Cuz when I'm with you I can touch the sky
I hope you know, I love you much
I love you more with each touch
I need you now more than ever
I want to hear the word "forever".

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People who throw kisses are hopelessly lazy.
-Bob Hope


© Copyright 1999 Susan Acacio - All Rights Reserved
shyone
Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 10

1 posted 2000-01-03 10:25 PM


That seems to be what everyone wants to hear.  God knows it is what I want.  I liked he poem.  It was nice.  A true reflection of real feelings that anybody can relate to.
Angel
Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-01-03 10:50 PM


Jeez, thanks. I did actually get to hear all of those things, I got my ring. Not what you think, our one year anniversary ring, kind of a going steady kind of deal. Thanks again. Hope to read some of your stuff real soon  .

 ~Susie~



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