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sonnet attempt # 2 for nan's workshop

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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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port charlotte fl/bklyn ny


0 posted 11-09-1999 02:00 AM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil


I watch the tear drops fall straight down her face
As her dear friend is lowered to the ground
She does not want to be here in this place
And sobbing is her bodys only sound
There is no comfort found in the sunlight
No warmth derived form all the glowing rays
Nor peace found in the beautiful twilight
Now sorrow seems to haunt all of her days
For one dear soul had left this world so weary
No comfort in her grace does this friend find
This life to me has become naught but dreary
So share a bit of hope I would not mind
True pain as with the bee will lose its sting
And life will continue in the living

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lovely!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.
Jennifer Marie O'Neil
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port charlotte fl/bklyn ny


2 posted 11-09-1999 03:56 PM       View Profile for Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Email Jennifer Marie O'Neil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jennifer Marie O'Neil

Thank you watcher I dont knoe how you find the time or interest to reply to all of my poems but the feedback is much appreciated

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Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE
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